@00:13Great animation [: It's really sweet, the movements lovely, although I think you should do something with the feet when he's pulling the worm out of the ground, maybe a bit of resistant force needed on them so he looks he's pulling with all his might? Also, know how hard animation is but from the end there's a little bit too much of a gap, maybe just have him fly back over and leave the screen? idk, but looks great, I really like how he does move a lot like a bird [: must have been a lot of studying there lol
@00:13Thanks for the crit! You're right that ending is awkwardly empty. I love the idea of having him reappear to fill the space, I might try bringing him in close to stare at or peck the camera or something though. I have sketched him flying, but I'm liking the idea of making him a flightless bird now.
And I can definitely do more with those feet on the pull, they're really pretty disconnected from the pulling movement now I pay attention to them.
@00:13You're very much welcome! Ooooh! Yes, that would be very cute, just him coming back into the picture and pecking at the screen, it would make him seem more wild and will bring humour to the watcher
Yush, all I'd advice is on the feet but that's it really, if you want anymore advice or anything do feel free to message me, I do animate, just not on DA (for now)
We can't update film files on dA apparently, but I'd like to try to rework it into something longer at some point anyway, so I might use stash and try to chase you up for advice before I post something next time, if you've the time.
I hope they change the film feature so we can update the files at some point. It's pretty daft we can't.